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Tuesday, October 06, 2009

To all my readers: I need your help with some editing

I have been working on improving the presentation and content of the main page of my website. Can you please help me by taking a look at it and posting any constructive advice about how I can make it really good? This includes spotting any typos.

Your input will be read with care and taken into account with further edits.

Here is the direct link to the page I am working on.

Please post your feedback by using the "comments" function below this article. Thank you.
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1 comment:

  1. Gary Moller11:57 am

    Hey, thanks for all the comments coming in folks, including the sharp-eyed ones who have spotted the typos.
    Whew!

    I will not post them but will work my way through your suggestions and incorporate them as best I can.

    Thanks again - really, really appreciated.

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